Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Quellegh Industrial

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Quellegh Industrial

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:24, December 30, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Just a little something from KotOR...

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 18:15, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:01, January 14, 2014 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:25, February 1, 2014 (UTC)
4. Cade Calrayn 21:17, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:49, February 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• Through Quellegh's aggressive marketing towards rich despots, during that time the company was becoming the standard for publicly traded stun weaponry designed for use by droids. - this sentence doesn't make much sense as the first part doesn't really connect with the second. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:50, January 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • I think I fixed it.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:05, January 2, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• One objection/question. Who is "their" referring to here? The despots, the weapon itself? I'm a bit unclear: "a strategy that company officials stated was responsible for their success." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:52, February 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • It is referring to the company, so I changed it to make that more clear.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:31, February 13, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:49, February 13, 2014 (UTC)