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Quell

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:40, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote OOM 224 22:30, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. ¿Que-ll? Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:08, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:17, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 14:53, 31 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

I sense something; a presence I've not felt since…
  • Review note: "during the Clone Wars fought between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems" is the preferred wording, emphasis mine.
  • Review note: while I removed this part as part of my copy-edit, "the Twi'lek's flagship" — it wouldn't hurt to repeat "the Liberty" here. Plus, readers might not get the hint that Secura was a Twi'lek.
  • Gonna have to ask you to shorten "Confederacy of Independent Systems" and "T-series military strategic analysis and tactics droid," given the wordiness of the intro and the fact that their full, formal titles aren't relevant.
  • I don't believe the "from across the galaxy" tidbit is relevant.
  • "Skywalker launched from his flagship in order to board the Liberty" — he launched what? I recommend rewording this to "Skywalker boarded the Liberty." OOM 224 21:48, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Resolved via Discord OOM 224 22:30, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
Braha
  • Looking at other large astro articles for reference, a world's locational info generally goes before it's internal description (geography). So I would like to recommend chronologically swapping the hyperlane stuff with the info about the surface. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:03, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:53, 31 July 2022 (UTC)


  • I completed a small update from Helmet Collection 73, hope you're fine with the addition. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:28, 29 July 2022 (UTC)