Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Puke

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Puke

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:10, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Puke shan't be returning in Shadow Fall, and a mention is very unlikely, let alone one with any new info.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 04:41, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:52, June 13, 2020 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:25, June 29, 2020 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni 15:12, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:45, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fred strikes back

• Ref error. MasterFredcerique 22:14, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 22:32, May 24, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• It'd be nice if the ABY date could be worked into the intro.
• Could ref 3 perhaps get a slight rewording to write in it's specific relevance to this character? Such as, the ref book says this, which then means that this character must be...; along that train of thought. I'm also not sure specifying that USW is a reference book is necessary.
• I'm not sure the date ref as it is currently can place that segment of Alphabet Squadron in 4 ABY. It places the Endor battle rightly as 4 ABY— but this happens weeks after that. It might indeed be possible to solidify this date with other logic, or if not, I would suggest doing something like H'Grathi; eg. "Several weeks after the Battle of Endor[1] in 4 ABY,[2]".
  • Does the death date work with {{Circa}}? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:49, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
    • It does, yes.—spookywilloww^talk 21:01, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• I think some slight context for Hound and Riot Squadron can be given in the intro, just to establish that those two squadrons are an opposing force. Upon first read, can seem like those two squadrons were Imperial, and comrades nicknamed the pilot that.—spookywilloww^talk 04:21, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:49, May 26, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• "Puke joined two TIE/ln space superiority starfighter squadrons aboard the Quasar Fire-class cruiser-carrier Aerie in hunting the New Republic EF76 Nebulon-B escort frigate Hellion's Dare and its two escort squadrons—Riot Squadron and Hound Squadron—as a part of an effort conducted by the 204th's Colonel Shakara Nuress to maintain the secrecy of the fighter wing's new base of operations in the Pandem Nai system." This sentence is too big. Try splitting it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:50, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:57, May 26, 2020 (UTC)

Ecks

• "Puke was among the two TIE/ln space superiority starfighter squadrons aboard the Quasar Fire-class cruiser-carrier Aerie in hunting the" This sentence reads really odd; the "in hunting" part doesn't seem to fit with the first part of the sentence. I think it's a remnant of some older wording.
  • Changed "in hunting." Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:31, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
• You use "numerous" twice in close succession in the bio. Can we get some variation? 1358 ^(Talk) 20:48, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:31, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:45, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

Ben

• My nominator's comment aged well. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 18:50, June 23, 2020 (UTC)

Omicron

• Just a quick note, you use it's for a possessive form, it should be its. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 19:02, June 29, 2020 (UTC)
  • Noted, thank you. I believe it is no longer the case now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 19:14, June 29, 2020 (UTC)