Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Prudy

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Prudy

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Nice expansion, and no spelling errors Enochf (talk) 02:56, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:32, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
  3. 501st dogma(talk) 19:35, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:32, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  5. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:25, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Stake black msg 17:54, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote There you go. Winterz (talk) 03:15, March 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Winterz
  • If she is pink-skinned how exactly do you know that she is a Lethan Twi'lek? Does the source mention it?
    • Sourced, you petty fools!
  • "(...) the conversation would have included the player accompanying Doc to Alderaan and an appearance of Prudy in person." I'm not sure "included" makes sense in that structure, reword please ("lead" would be one option more suitable).
    • Changed the beginning of the sentence.
      • Are you trying to fool me? Nothing has changed. I meant that a consersation can't include such things and though I understand that it is sort of a game mechanism as in "conversation" portraying a mission but that still makes it confusing and therefore someone reading "conversation includes someone travelling to X" is just wrong. A conversation leads to other events/actions, it does not include them. Tweak this. Winterz (talk) 03:07, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
        • ... dafuq? I know that I saved the updated version of the sentence. See how it looks now. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:10, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • In the intro you say the gangsters burned the Hospital before her rescue however in the body you say she was already free before they burnt it down. Fix this, sir. Winterz (talk) 17:19, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
Flambé sur le bûcher
  • Link to the date of her kidnapping.
    • Done.
  • Was she a medical doctor? If so, this is important. Technically, a doctor is just someone with a doctorate.
    • Done.
  • Could you elaborate a little on this sentence: "Doc was able to secure Prudy's release by taking her place as the gang's hostage, though he managed to escape with the help of the Republic Customs Office and its hostage negotiators."?
    • Nothing more to elaborate on.
  • "Pleasant" personality? Says who? "Clingy" is also a value judgment. You're judging her based on one relationship.
    • Again, the NPOV claims are really subjective, but whatever.
  • Nickpick: the infobox image could have a caption explaining that was a hologram representation of her. Also, the BtS could also say that she only appears as a hologram. Stake black msg 17:37, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • BTS, yes, but caption, no. That's never been necessary. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:46, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Using the Episode I Visual Dictionary as you are to source the fact that this character is a Lethan Twi'lek implies that this information comes literally from that source, when you are merely deriving the information from indirect information. Instead of simply sourcing the Visual Dictionary, I would suggest leaving a reference note explaining how you are drawing a conclusion based on unrelated information from that source. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:23, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:11, March 29, 2013 (UTC)