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Port in a Storm
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(she/her) (talk) 19:43, 23 November 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
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UberSoldat93 
(talk) 12:18, 16 December 2021 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 17:55, 30 January 2022 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:31, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:45, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- For some reason couldn't stop thinking about the song Riders of the Storm while reading this. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:59, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- OOM 224 17:23, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
Object
Braha'in a'tok
The history section requires some level of sub-sectioning.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)- Done. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 02:28, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Immi Thrax
Pijal, Hosnian Prime, and Han Solo needs contextBraha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:18, 24 November 2021 (UTC)- Done, if Hosnian Prime works? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 18:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- Unsure what the seat means but I assume that's some political terminology. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:49, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- Oop! So, "the seat" is where the government operates from, usually the same as its capital. However, the book doesn't actually identify Hosnian Prime with the word "capital" (and despite my searching, didn't seem to call it a planet either?) So perhaps for clarity, I could rework that and use another ref for context. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 04:16, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
- See if the revision works. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 08:20, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
- Perfect. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:42, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
- Oop! So, "the seat" is where the government operates from, usually the same as its capital. However, the book doesn't actually identify Hosnian Prime with the word "capital" (and despite my searching, didn't seem to call it a planet either?) So perhaps for clarity, I could rework that and use another ref for context. Immi Thrax
- Unsure what the seat means but I assume that's some political terminology. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:49, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done, if Hosnian Prime works? Immi Thrax
Riosa also needs context.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:19, 24 November 2021 (UTC)- Done. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 18:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Immi Thrax
Pasta in a Storm
Appearances/Sources needs to specify the first appearance/source that mentioned the drink prior to it being retconned into AOTC. See Puck Naeco/Legends#Appearances as an example.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:07, 25 November 2021 (UTC)- Oh thank you! I'm still getting my head around what's considered a retconned appearance, so my formatting is behind. Let me know if I've got it right. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 08:20, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
- Gave it a tweak, but looks good!
- Oh thank you! I'm still getting my head around what's considered a retconned appearance, so my formatting is behind. Let me know if I've got it right. Immi Thrax
Can we really be sure that How to Not Get Eaten by Ewoks depicts the drink during the events of AOTC? Perhaps that would be better sourced to the film itself.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:09, 25 November 2021 (UTC)- Adjusted that, have a look! Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 11:15, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
- Adjusted that, have a look! Immi Thrax
Does the source actually say that proving your Pamarthen-ism by drinking it is a ritual, or maybe is it just a random thing that the tavern-keeper decided to do? No rush on that since I know you've been busy.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:47, 31 January 2022 (UTC)- It actually never occured to me that it might be something just in the moment from this tavern-keeper and not a ritual. Thanks for pointing that out! I reviewed the chapter and I just assumed. Have I caught and removed all of that, or did I miss anything? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 21:48, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:31, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
- It actually never occured to me that it might be something just in the moment from this tavern-keeper and not a ritual. Thanks for pointing that out! I reviewed the chapter and I just assumed. Have I caught and removed all of that, or did I miss anything? Immi Thrax
UberSoldat
What do you think about moving the info about the saying to History? I say this because that's where Bassa hound documents it.- Sure--thought on which subsection? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 07:56, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- When is the saying said? UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:26, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Looks from Star Wars: The Last Jedi – DJ – Most Wanted 1 like it'd be "by 34 ABY" (just prior to Episode VIII). The content about that saying doesn't really fit with the current subheadings, so not sure where it'd slot in. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 13:13, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Should be fine under "Recipe for relief." UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:16, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Made the move--and double-checked that I definitely saved this time. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 14:35, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Oh, can you also specify who's saying it like Bassa does? I realize this will bring the article above 1000 words. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:48, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- I'd rather not add any more detail about that one line of narration than is already there, since it's all unrelated to the actual drink. It's just a thought DJ has when he gets arrested: "All I want to do is spend a week at Zord's Spa and Bathhouse. But... any port in a storm." The bassa hound example is explicitly referencing bassa hounds, whereas the saying is... well, a saying. The drink is likely named for that saying, but using the saying doesn't mean referencing the drink. Actually toyed with whether it ought to be there at all, but I think the duck test supports noting that there's a saying close to the drink name, but not stating that the drink is named for it? (Thanks for keeping an eye on the word count, too! I keep eyeing it like "almost... there.....") Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 09:45, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Discussed on Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:18, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Discussed on Discord. UberSoldat93
- I'd rather not add any more detail about that one line of narration than is already there, since it's all unrelated to the actual drink. It's just a thought DJ has when he gets arrested: "All I want to do is spend a week at Zord's Spa and Bathhouse. But... any port in a storm." The bassa hound example is explicitly referencing bassa hounds, whereas the saying is... well, a saying. The drink is likely named for that saying, but using the saying doesn't mean referencing the drink. Actually toyed with whether it ought to be there at all, but I think the duck test supports noting that there's a saying close to the drink name, but not stating that the drink is named for it? (Thanks for keeping an eye on the word count, too! I keep eyeing it like "almost... there.....") Immi Thrax
- Oh, can you also specify who's saying it like Bassa does? I realize this will bring the article above 1000 words. UberSoldat93
- Made the move--and double-checked that I definitely saved this time. Immi Thrax
- Should be fine under "Recipe for relief." UberSoldat93
- Looks from Star Wars: The Last Jedi – DJ – Most Wanted 1 like it'd be "by 34 ABY" (just prior to Episode VIII). The content about that saying doesn't really fit with the current subheadings, so not sure where it'd slot in. Immi Thrax
- When is the saying said? UberSoldat93
- Sure--thought on which subsection? Immi Thrax
The Takodana mission takes place in 5 ABY.UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:18, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you, changed that! Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 07:56, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- No changes were made. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:26, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Argh, save failure, thanks for heads-up. Re-changed and this time it saved! Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 13:13, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
- Argh, save failure, thanks for heads-up. Re-changed and this time it saved! Immi Thrax
- No changes were made. UberSoldat93
- Thank you, changed that! Immi Thrax
Luca
"A woman of Pamarthe" occupies more than my entire screen, could you further subsection it?- Just my two cents, subsectioning is done based on the number of paragraphs, not the total length on the screen. The section looks fine to me. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:45, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
- Just my two cents, subsectioning is done based on the number of paragraphs, not the total length on the screen. The section looks fine to me. UberSoldat93
I'd like to see a bit of context for the Outlander Club.LucaRoR (Talk) 08:59, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- It's self-contextualizing (Club), see Kral Grek for an example. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
- It's self-contextualizing (Club), see Kral Grek for an example. UberSoldat93
Comments
- Noting that I'm keeping a close watch with wordcounter since it hovers right around 1k words, sometimes over and sometimes under. If the review process takes it over and it stays stable over 1k, I'll withdraw accordingly. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 18:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:23, 8 February 2022 (UTC)