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Pornography
- Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: first legends nom!
- Date Archived: 15:09, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 755 words (146 introduction, 454 body, 155 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 832 words (152 introduction, 440 body, 240 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Entertainment and Culture, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Galaxies
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Support
- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:19, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 19:22, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 02:35, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 00:13, 27 August 2024 (UTC)- NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:50, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Object
Go to horny jail *bonk
The first sentence of the intro and the description section should include a basic definition of what porn is/intended for- there isn't a single source that actually provides a definition of porn, the closest is the Holiday Special having the Mermeia scene, but per it being referred to as softcore OOU, it shouldn't be assumed that it's representative of what all porn is like. And while Attichitcuk's interaction with Mermeia is described as erotic in Insider 23, it doesn't mean all porn involves erotic stuff. Sanathestarr (talk) 20:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
'Softcore pornography' appears to be an OOU exclusive term, so shouldn't be used in the article- reworded Sanathestarr (talk) 20:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Second BTS paragraph: The first sentence covers most of the paragraph so should be broken upCommander Code-8 Hello There! 09:38, 20 August 2024 (UTC)- done Sanathestarr (talk) 20:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:09, 27 August 2024 (UTC)