- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Pollus Maksim
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 21:18, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Originally, I'd thought this to seem a very simple update, possibly one that would remain CA length. Was sorely mistaken, to put it briefly, and the updates ended up taking a few months to iron out firmly, to which I'm still not terribly happy with.
- Date Archived: 17:49, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 436 words (76 introduction, 315 body, 45 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:AMB
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Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:23, 16 December 2023 (UTC)- Nice work. UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:58, 16 December 2023 (UTC) 
Fan26 (Talk) 21:25, 17 December 2023 (UTC)- Objection addressed via discord Lewisr (talk) 01:56, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 17:48, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Object
Anil
Shouldn't Ackbar be referred to as an Admiral instead of General, unless the novel suggests he acted as a general in the KDY battle? IIRC, the book also explicitly states that Ackbar was a Fleet Admiral at that time.- Amended to admiral—it doesn't seem to use the capitalized version of the title for Ackbar until later in the novel (ch. 37) so just stuck with admiral.—spookywillowwtalk 00:52, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
The date note about the brochure should note that the KDY Corporate Folder is from the OOU Rebel Files (and its deluxe edition).Also on the same note, "by that time" suggests the brochure could have been released prior to the Executor's introduction, contradicting the "following 0 ABY" date in the article body. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:33, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
- Both amended.—spookywillowwtalk 00:52, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:49, 18 December 2023 (UTC)