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Politrix
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:11, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Jedi from Yoda: Dark Rendezvous
(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
Just waiting for Tranner's objections to be resolved. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 22:05, June 14, 2011 (UTC)- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 01:56, June 15, 2011 (UTC) 
Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:59, June 15, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 21:06, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 23:58, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Kilson
In the Intro, "Two months after the beginning of the Clone Wars on the planet Geonosis, Politrix was killed by a plasma grenade during a Confederate ambush." This makes it sound like Politrix was killed on Geonosis. Just remove the part about Geonosis, and you should be fine.- Removed.
In the Bio, "Politrix was a Force-sensitive female Human who lived in the final years of the Republic Classic era." You'll need a different source for the "Republic Classic era". You should probably try the era's entry in the CSWE.- Sourced.
In the Bts, since you mentioned the release year of Yoda: Dark Rendezvous, you should also insert the release year for the CSWE.- Added.
- Otherwise, good job Lee. Wait, a plasma grenade? Shouldn't that be in Halo? :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 05:26, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:58, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
"Politrix was a female Human Jedi Knight who lived during the last years of the Galactic Republic. After being raised at the Jedi Temple on the planet Coruscant, she reached the rank of Jedi Knight." - Mentioning that she was a Jedi Knight before saying she became a Jedi Knight is pretty redundant. Please fix.- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:15, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
The "Some time later" transition in the first paragraph of the bio doesn't really work when there's no established time reference preceding it. Please reword.- Reworded.
More of a question than an actual objection: Are the troops she led into battle clone troopers? I assume they are, but I linked "troops" to the generic "trooper" article for the time being.- Not stated that they are clones. It's nearly certain, but not explicitly said.
- That should be all. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 18:43, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:15, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:58, June 15, 2011 (UTC)