- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Plee
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- May the PIE be with you Kilson Likes PIE 16:21, 12 April 09 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 18:56, 13 April 2009 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Come with me if you want to live.) 21:42, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 23:07, 14 April 2009 (UTC) - SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 05:04, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
Now that the right female Bantam author is credited. :P - Lord Hydronium 00:06, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
Object
- The PIE lover's view
You should expand the intro another two or three sentences. You could mention how he and the other scientists competed over resources while trying to rebuild the planet's ecosystem.- Done
Give some context to Leia in the intro and body paragraphs. Yes, I know for most readers it would be obvious, but for people new to Star Wars who are reading this article, a little information goes a long way.- I'm not sure what you want here. There is nothing about Leia that is relevant. I could say she was a NR bureaucrat, or former Senator/CoS I guess...
- You could just mention she's the former Chief of State or a Jedi in training.
- Done
- You could just mention she's the former Chief of State or a Jedi in training.
- I'm not sure what you want here. There is nothing about Leia that is relevant. I could say she was a NR bureaucrat, or former Senator/CoS I guess...
Also, give some context to the Yuuzhan Vong and the war in the intro and the main body.- Done.
...indeed, another scientist tried to claim Sector Four to use for grain projects.Who is this other scientist? Does he or she have a name? If so, put it in there.- Not named.
Could you expand the Personality and traits section. I know there's not that much info out on this dude, but did he have any known habits or mannerisms. I don't care if he picked his nose once in awhile, any bit of information helps.- Unfortunately, no picking of noses. That's all there is.
Besides these five, it looks pretty nice. It's better that half the stuff I nominate.:) Kilson Likes PIE 09:00, 11 April 09 (UTC)
- Bumrushin' the Show with IFYLOFD:
Give a few words of context for SELCORE in the intro.- Done
- ...that's all. Very well done. IFYLOFD (Come with me if you want to live.) 01:09, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
- Soresu
All the sentences in the second paragraph of the bio begin a bit repetitively. Mix it up a bit.- I'm not sure I understand what you mean? How are they repetitive? --Eyrezer 00:05, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
- Arg. My apologies. That's what happens when you try and do too many things at the same time. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:04, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure I understand what you mean? How are they repetitive? --Eyrezer 00:05, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
the efforts of Plee and the rest were ultimately in vain. I wouldn't really say vain. Duro was, in the end, "restored to a habitable state" by the Yuuzhan Vong. Maybe make a note about it.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 12:44, 14 April 2009 (UTC)- Cool. Done --Eyrezer 00:00, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:11, 18 April 2009 (UTC)