Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Platform 8127/121

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Platform 8127/121

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 23:12, July 20, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A random space defense station

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:09, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
2. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:08, July 26, 2013 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, July 31, 2013 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:10, August 1, 2013 (UTC)
5. Winterz (talk) 20:30, August 5, 2013 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:05, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
7. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 05:02, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Moffship

• "Additionally, all of the armaments worked like turrets." - This sentence is inserted rather awkwardly, in my opinion, in the Description section and could use a little more explanation.
• In the History section, many of the sentences start with phrases beginning "After" (along with two sentences saying something to the effect of "After Veshiv arrived"). Please mix things up a bit here.
• You should mention the Far Orbit's true colors when first introducing the ship in the History section. There's no real need to save this revelation for the end.
• Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:51, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • All done. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:16, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
• One last thing: I think it would be appropriate to add a final sentence to the History section mentioning Veshiv's fate (perhaps not his final fate, but something about what happened immediately after he was captured). Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:14, July 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • That should do it. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:50, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:02, August 16, 2013 (UTC)