Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pipada

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Pipada

• Nominated by: Mor9347 (talk) 12:15, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: FOR PIPADA!!!
• Date Archived: 04:43, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 839 words (161 introduction, 639 body, 39 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 749 words (161 introduction, 549 body, 39 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:AST, WP:FFG

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:05, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
2. CometSmudge (talk) 22:44, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
3. There's always room for a little more Shawda Ubb in the world Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet

• Trees seem like they could be added to the flora in the infoxbox based on their mention in Locations section
• Would it be better to refer to Pao as Paodok'Draba'Takat, since that seems like a more proper name than just Pao?
• Could the Pipada Symphony Chamber Chorus be mentioned somewhere?
• Similar to how you did it on Pao, the IU mention in Alien Archive should be included in the History section.CometSmudge (talk) 01:22, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed Mor9347 ^(Talk) 03:40, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Well-spotted about the trees, could you also mention and link them in Description? Imperators II^(Talk) 09:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Yep! also addressed! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 11:37, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
• Drabatese is infobox exclusive CometSmudge (talk)
  • Addressed Mor9347 ^(Talk) 19:56, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Nice work! Only objection is that there's room for an image in either the inhabitants or locations section, maybe a Hutt or Shawda Ubb? (or both if you're feeling fancy) Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:02, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • One thing I've learned from my copy-edit on this one is that there's *definitely* not enough room in Inhabitants. :P Imperators II^(Talk) 23:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
    • How so? Any fullscreen capture from a film or TV show should fit in there fine, File:Jabba joins the Shadow Collective.png for example. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:31, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Thank you! I haven't been able to find any images that can look nice in the article while comfortably fitting in the sections, if you know of any feel free to give me suggestions via discord! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 03:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• I think a date for the end of the Clone Wars/formation of the Empire would be worth adding in Lewisr (talk) 00:57, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Added! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 03:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
• Comparing with other status pages, I think the lakes should be moved to the water field Lewisr (talk) 03:08, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
• Is it reed or reeds? The infobox and description slightly differ, so if multiple the infobox should reflect as well Lewisr (talk) 03:08, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
• The Drabatan in the native species field should also be plural judging by the homeworld section in Dawn of Rebellion similar to how the ones below are Lewisr (talk) 03:08, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
• Pao's full name should be used at the first mention Lewisr (talk) 03:08, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
• The explosion from Ank Parako happened even if Kay wasn't informed in game so that part should be moved outside of the mechanics, and the mechanics just note that Ank told Kay about it Lewisr (talk) 03:08, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
  • addressed! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 05:57, 13 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:43, 15 December 2024 (UTC)