Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pertaal Logris

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Pertaal Logris

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:56, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 303 words. DarkStryder

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:05, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:20, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
3. JangFett ^(Talk) 07:01, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
4. -- Xd ^(Talk) 19:36, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:57, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Moffship

• "As the Moff fled into the depths of the Kathol sector, Sarne ordered the Charis Fleet to be broken down into smaller taskforces to undertake missions to undermine the New Republic's diplomatic and military missions as they sought to expand their sphere of influence in the region." - I'm a little confused as to who "they" refers to here. I assume that you're referring to the New Republic, but I don't know for sure.
  • Reworded. Hopefully, it is clearer now.
• Very nice. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:49, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thank you. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:21, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:57, September 4, 2010 (UTC)