Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Penetrator

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Penetrator

• Nominated by: Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 10:10, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: [Redacted by administration]

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. I'm curious how the story ends. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:31, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
2. [Redacted by administration] IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:24, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
3. Grunny (talk) 13:02, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:55, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:46, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Grunny

• Can you vary up one of the "including"s here: "including a list of Star Destroyers being built by Kuat Drive Yards, including the Penetrator."
  • Done.
• Once again, please remember to reload the infobox. Grunny (talk) 04:12, June 21, 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review Grunny. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 12:16, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Moffship

• The second paragraph of the History section is largely irrelevant to the Penetrator itself. Please condense it and incorporate it into the first paragraph. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:45, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
  • Is that good, or should I cut it down a little more. Also, word count is at 270 at the moment. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 12:58, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
    • The sentence about Shannon's mother interrupting the conversation is still irrelevant to the Penetrator. Remove that, add the remaining sentence to the end of the other paragraph, and it should be fine. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:28, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
      • Done, word count's at 257 at the moment. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 22:42, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:46, June 27, 2011 (UTC)