- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Party Poster
- Nominated by: Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 15:10, July 18, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: A Poster from Star Wars Galaxies
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Seems clean. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:18, July 19, 2011 (UTC)- Good job EJ. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:19, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
Nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:49, July 24, 2011 (UTC)- Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 19:41, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Nice work. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 01:34, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Object
No mention of what Uhl Eharl Khoehng actually is. Kind of changes the whole context of the thing. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 17:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)- Hmm, I did not know that this existed, I guess I did not type it correctly into the searchbox. I'll try to fix this as soon as possible.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:34, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- I changed the article to reflect the reference to Uhl Eharl Khoehng. I think I did it without making it speculation. Man, that was a great catch, thank you.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- I changed the article to reflect the reference to Uhl Eharl Khoehng. I think I did it without making it speculation. Man, that was a great catch, thank you.--Exiled Jedi
- Hmm, I did not know that this existed, I guess I did not type it correctly into the searchbox. I'll try to fix this as soon as possible.--Exiled Jedi
Toprawa
Looks good. Two things, though. Firstly, the infobox describes the poster as a "painting," but this is never again referenced at any point throughout the rest of the article. If it's a painting, the article proper should mention this. Or, alternatively, the infobox should be revised somehow.- I changed the infobox to say poster instead of painting.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 11:59, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
- I changed the infobox to say poster instead of painting.--Exiled Jedi
Secondly, the 100% game completion paragraph needs to be referenced.Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:08, July 24, 2011 (UTC)- Good catch, fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 11:59, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
- Good catch, fixed.--Exiled Jedi
Cal Jedi
Very good job. Just to clear up my mind though, shouldn't there be an article for the spacer?Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:36, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- The spacer is just a placeholder for the player character in Star Wars Galaxies. An article can not be created that includes all of the quests from Galaxies, because one player cannot do all of the quests in Galaxies. On the other end of the spectrum, you cannot say that every quest was done by a different person. That's my reasoning, and the way I am doing it seems to be the way it has been done in articles in the past.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- OK, I've never played Galaxies, so I just wanted to make sure. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 19:40, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- OK, I've never played Galaxies, so I just wanted to make sure. Cal Jedi
- The spacer is just a placeholder for the player character in Star Wars Galaxies. An article can not be created that includes all of the quests from Galaxies, because one player cannot do all of the quests in Galaxies. On the other end of the spectrum, you cannot say that every quest was done by a different person. That's my reasoning, and the way I am doing it seems to be the way it has been done in articles in the past.--Exiled Jedi
Moffship
Only one: "The tragedy Uhl Eharl Khoehng, which was the exact same words as the Aurebesh text that appeared on the poster..." - The phrasing of this sentence is bugging me; the clause really isn't matching up with the subject here. Please reword.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 14:02, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- How is this?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:11, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
- How is this?--Exiled Jedi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:34, July 27, 2011 (UTC)