Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Panza Hondi

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Panza Hondi

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Wow! It's been almost a year since I said I was going to do this article.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Looks good. 501st dogma(talk) 12:25, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:08, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Good work, EJ. Better late than never. :P —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 04:59, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
  4. So that's what that thing on your userpage is. Interesting. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 02:31, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
    • Don't know why, but for some strange reason I like these guys.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:47, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:31, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:04, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. This is more of an aesthetic objection than a content one—could the image be moved down in the body? Like at the start of the P&T, maybe? I can understand if you don't think so. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:16, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I would strongly recommend removing the extra context about the Battle of Naboo, which does little to nothing to beneficially supplement the focus of this article in any way. The only real purpose it serves is to give a time frame for the character's existence, so the only context that would really be needed is to add a year. Such as "the Battle of Naboo in 32 BBY," etc.: "a battle fought between the Trade Federation and the Naboo natives."
  • Is it fair to add something to his P/T about wearing goggles? Not sure if that's his natural face or if he has on a pair.
  • Ok, I'm a bit confused with the article's treatment of Hondi's capture. If CSWE confirms that Jango Fett apprehended him, then that information should not be presented within the Gamemechanics template, as it is currently. That template is really for information that we're not entirely sure even happens in canon, and thus is treated ambiguously. However, CSWE's information elevates Hondi's apprehension above that ambiguity.
    • The part about live capture needs to stay in the template, so I changed it to the way it is now.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:46, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
      • That's fine. I did some rewording to that sentence in the template. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:04, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see some consistency among the referencing. If you're going to source books by page number, do so for every relevant reference note, namely reference number 6. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:56, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:04, August 12, 2012 (UTC)