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Palo Torshan
- Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:27, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Rebel Echo Base officer. 416 easy words.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Very nice. CC7567 (talk) 03:54, 16 August 2009 (UTC)- JangFett Talk 04:21, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:39, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
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Object
Possibly mention that he is a Human male in the bio. Great work Tope :)JangFett Talk 04:13, 16 August 2009 (UTC)- I'd prefer not to, since it would be pretty redundant in addition to the intro and infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:16, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- I guess it would be redundant since I haven't seen this in other articles, however, I've been told to add that for my Bast GAN :P
- It's certainly not wrong, but I wouldn't make it a requirement, especially in articles this short. Thanks for your review. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:29, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- I guess it would be redundant since I haven't seen this in other articles, however, I've been told to add that for my Bast GAN :P
- I'd prefer not to, since it would be pretty redundant in addition to the intro and infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:16, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
This is minor, and I don't mind too much about this, but I would prefer the intro to be chronologically ordered for ease of understanding, with the Yavin info before the Hoth stuff.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:55, 16 August 2009 (UTC)- I understand your point, but I don't think this is entirely necessary in this case, otherwise I would have certainly done so. The intro is two sentences long, with proper dates provided. Honestly, if someone can't understand those sentences after reading them, their problems are far and beyond anything Wookieepedia-related. If this were an intro multiple sentences/paragraphs long, then, yes, I would definitely agree with you this would be needed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:24, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- I feel I should also clarify, my motivation is that I want to avoid making the intro sound exactly the same as the biography, which is going to happen in this case with such limited info should they both be presented exactly in chrono. order. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:35, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- Sure. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:39, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- I feel I should also clarify, my motivation is that I want to avoid making the intro sound exactly the same as the biography, which is going to happen in this case with such limited info should they both be presented exactly in chrono. order. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:35, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
- I understand your point, but I don't think this is entirely necessary in this case, otherwise I would have certainly done so. The intro is two sentences long, with proper dates provided. Honestly, if someone can't understand those sentences after reading them, their problems are far and beyond anything Wookieepedia-related. If this were an intro multiple sentences/paragraphs long, then, yes, I would definitely agree with you this would be needed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:24, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:09, 23 August 2009 (UTC)