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Pablo

  • Nominated by: Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 10:07, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Can't believe I nominated Pablo Hidalgo!
  • Date Archived: 19:47, 22 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 656 words (140 introduction, 477 body, 39 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 510 words (90 introduction, 381 body, 39 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support votes

  1. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 15:50, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 20:59, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:56, 22 April 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 19:07, 22 April 2025 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 19:45, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Wok
  • Intro needs a specific date
  • Nal Hutta needs context as a planet in both intro and body. Think you may need a separate reference for that since I don't believe it is called a planet in the episode.
  • Just a general note - try to avoid contractions when you can
  • The choking part confuses me. It currently reads that he uses the toothpick to choke him?
  • Skin color and eye color is infobox exclusive. Wok142 (talk) 17:56, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Addressed all! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 01:05, 8 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Still seeing multiple contractions. Wok142 (talk) 03:40, 8 February 2025 (UTC)
        • Apologies, forgot those, fixed now! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 08:06, 10 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Intro says "After angering Bane, who had choked him" when really Bane got angry and then choked him
  • Re-worded a bit of the intro here if you think this is smoother
  • I think what they did acquire should be noted. Bane got his hat and they all got some other gear I thought. Wok142 (talk) 03:40, 8 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Intro rewording looks good! addressed the other objections! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 08:06, 10 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Sorry I am being so segmented in objections but I have some more things. First, the mention of the Clone Wars is currently intro-exclusive so that should be in the body as well. And as you do that, you'll need to mention the Republic and CIS as per usual.
  • Pablo's yellow ridge of spines on his head can be detailed in p&t
  • In bts, the episode needs a release date as well as a season and episode number. If you want an example for that, you can peek at Plan 7.
  • Pablo Hidalgo himself needs context. Wok142 (talk) 09:20, 11 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Addressed objections Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 19:20, 12 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Thanks for sticking with me on these. FYI I changed the context for Hidalgo to be "Lucasfilm Story Group member" rather than just author - he's not just an ordinary author after all. Wok142 (talk) 18:40, 13 February 2025 (UTC)
  • There's a few minor details that I think can be added - 1) The episode gallery for the episode guide directly says that Bane is threatening his life, so even though we messed with the wording earlier to make that strange part ambiguous, this aspect can be explicitly mentioned. 2) Pablo's databank entry describes him as a "slimy trader" who sells "deadly gear," and these both seem worth including as well. Wok142 (talk) 19:55, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Reworded some parts to include the information, let me know what you think! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 20:18, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Nicely done. Wok142 (talk) 03:52, 22 February 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • Both Nal Hutta being a planet and the Clone Wars being between the Republic and Separatists is citable to Star Wars: The Visual Encyclopedia, so would recommend switching the references Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Quick question because I don't really recall offhand, but how do we know the Twi'lek is Pablo's partner? Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Both the encyclopedia and it's copy-over to the databank identify them as his "Twi'lek partner" it's not clear if they're simply a business partner or a romantic partner because of how affectionate they seem to be of him so that's why they're absent from the partners box. Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 03:33, 15 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Thanks for clarifying! Then I think they should be introduced sooner, preferably in the first paragraph where you mention the shop, and it be cited to the encyclopedia if not in the episode Lewisr (talk) 05:36, 15 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The first use of Pablo's pronouns is cited to the episode, if it can be to the episode then the infobox should be changed to follow suit, or it will need to be cited to the encyclopedia Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Coruscant being a planet isn't citable to "Deception," but also is to The Visual Encyclopedia Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The episode's airdate isn't citable to the episode guide, I'd change the reference to Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Missing the relevant pronouns category Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Addressed all objections! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 03:33, 15 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Think the Coruscant one slipped by Lewisr (talk) 05:36, 15 February 2025 (UTC)
        • You thought correct, that's my bad. I also moved Pablo's partner's mention up in both the body and intro! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 15:38, 15 February 2025 (UTC)
  • I think it's worth noting that he spoke Basic in a skills/abilities section Lewisr (talk) 04:53, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The medicat should be added into sources, the legends page has it if you don't know the formatting/how to add it Lewisr (talk) 04:53, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Since Nal Hutta is stated in the encyclopedia to be his homeworld, I think the biography should make that more clearer Lewisr (talk) 04:53, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Addressed! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 14:38, 20 February 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • On the grounds noted in policy regarding socials posts without backups or screenshots being subject to review boards' review, I object on the BTS Tweet remaining in place, as I previously noted on Discord when this came up months back. One, the account that (purportedly) asked it is now suspended from Twitter. Secondly (but related), Jonas1015119 was the one who added that to the page. While I'd presume they're the same jonas in the Tweet @, that doesn't really bode well for verifiability because they very well could've just falsified a Tweet with their own handle. Had it been any Wookieepedian of reputable standing (say if like, an admin or board member, or even very prolific editor) had added it, that would've been in its favor, but alas. Thirdly, even though Leland was asked in our Discord, he outright confirmed its not in the Holocron. This doesn't mean that its not true, it could be (but more importantly, could not be); that's also not a point in its favor of it being citable to standard, though. So I strongly feel that unless any backup can be found (and I understand that may not be possible), this falls firmly in the grounds of it being objectable to remove it. An otheruses for the (several) Pablo characters and OOU people can then be made, allowing people to infer for themselves what they may.—spookywillowwtalk 01:50, 19 March 2025 (UTC)
    • I've removed the information and have reached out to Jonas about the addition on their talk page as they made another edit not long ago. It's unfortunate that we've lost so much information from Twitter. Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 11:18, 20 March 2025 (UTC)
Soupysalmonyumyum54
  • Minor tweaks under Biography: I think establishing Pablo's partner as a Twi'lek when first mentioning her would be useful. I would also mention "Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi" first, then specify that he was disguised as the bounty hunter Rako Hardeen.
  • Might also be worth specifying that Coruscant is the Republic capital planet and that Nal Hutta is a Hutt Space planet. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 02:23, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
    • Done! thank you for reviewing! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 10:07, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:47, 22 April 2025 (UTC)