Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/PM-1203

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PM-1203

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 05:21, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A CAnom that ran too long.

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote They say those are the best CAnoms. Imperators II(Talk) 05:48, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:41, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 06:39, September 7, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cwedin(talk) 07:14, September 12, 2016 (UTC)
  5. --LelalMekha (talk) 18:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
  6. --The Brave Goldfish (talk) 15:47, October 16, 2016 (EET)
  7. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:08, November 1, 2016 (UTC)
  8. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 13:45, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • I would say that you could include a Locations section here with information about the base and perhaps other landmarks if they exist. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:38, September 13, 2016 (UTC)
    • It's doable, but I don't believe its really necessary in this case, especially since Fort Anaxes is the only location of note on PM-1203. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:05, September 13, 2016 (UTC)
Ecks
  • The first sentence in the intro is quite a run-on. On the other hand, the second is quite short, so maybe you could do some tweaking there.
  • I feel like linking the Destruction of Anaxes in the word "created" is a bit wrong. Even linking the word "remnants" would be better, but maybe there's an even better option.
  • The second sentence of the description is also quite a run-on, further exaggerated by the numerous references. See if you can do something about it.
  • Last sentence of History has similar issues of being a run-on and quite choppy.
  • The Bts image caption is not a full sentence and does not require punctuation at the end. 1358 (Talk) 22:56, February 27, 2017 (UTC)
    • All objections addressed. - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:45, March 13, 2017 (UTC)
  • One more, for good measure. "Later, two of the rebels, Jedi Kanan Jarrus and his Padawan Ezra Bridger, returned to PM-1203 to draw the Grand Inquisitor away from the Ghost, which had rescued Tseebo, a defecting Imperial Information Office worker carrying top-secret information, from the Empire." Very choppy sentence. See if you can do something about it. 1358 (Talk) 13:49, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:45, April 26, 2017 (UTC)