Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Oviedo Engineering

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Oviedo Engineering

  • Nominated by: Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:57, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I don't think I should mention the Oviedo bit in the BtS, but I want to, so… :P
  • Date Archived: 20:44, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 495 words (147 introduction, 297 body, 51 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS WP:CSWE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:57, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 00:31, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:11, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:36, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
  5. NotBoop (talk) 20:41, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • "...a conflict between the Confederacy of Independent Systems and the Galactic Republic, in 22 BBY." Would this be better if tweaked to indicate the war began in 22 BBY? Currently reads as if the war entirely took place in that year.
  • "as he believed that the director's silence was of greater worth than his complicity." possible to squeeze a synonym or two into this? Seems to echo the quote almost word-for-word.—spookywillowwtalk 14:34, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Nvm for these, was more of a misread for the first one.—spookywillowwtalk 00:57, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Identical reference in Description.
    • Removed
  • Our article for Aviles Prime calls it a planet, unlike here. I just want to confirm which piece of information is correct.
    • The comic doesn't refer to Aviles as a planet, appears to be a holdover from earlier edits. But I've changed it on the Aviles page to match what this page has
  • Any reason for why the ship had to stop at Asturias? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:53, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
    • The comic doesn't really appear to specify and I don't think it's too relevant to the company itself Lewisr (talk) 20:19, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Addressing the objections for this nom Lewisr (talk) 20:07, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:44, 31 May 2023 (UTC)