Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Osh Scal

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Osh Scal

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:26, October 22, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I always wish we'd gotten more info on these weird little guys

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Noice. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 16:58, October 24, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:43, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:33, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 21:26, October 26, 2018 (UTC)
  5. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:10, October 27, 2018 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 21:50, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

Object

QGJ
  • According to the description of Category:Polis Massans and the information presented in the Polis Massa article, the Kalidahins were pretty much permanent residents on Polis Massa. This article only states that they worked there at a dig site. Which one is correct? If its the latter, then I don't think that the category fits here. You can't call someone a Polis Massan, if they were only stationed on Polis Massa on a job assignment.
    • I've moved them all over to the Kallidahin category since you're right, I assume Polis Massans was a from back before they revealed the actual name. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, October 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • The wording here seems to imply that Scal himself was a physican or a xenobiologist. Scal was part of a team consisting of two trained physicians and several xenobiologists who attended to Amidala
    • Scal is either a trained physican or a xenobiologist, but it's never made clear which, so this is as much detail as I could give. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, October 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • Something about this part does not seem right. It seems like a word is missing or some rewording is needed. the room was emptied other than Kenobi,
    • I'm fairly certain that worked, but I've re-woreded it now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:18, October 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • You spell it "child birth" in the bio, but "child-birth" in the P&T. Please choose one, preferrably one used by the actual source(s)
  • Is there no context for Dznori Xam that can be added? Something like "a fellow technician" at least. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:21, October 23, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:02, October 29, 2018 (UTC)