Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orn

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Orn

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:24, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tangentially connected to my favorite project.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Always glad to review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:38, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:20, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:43, June 10, 2014 (UTC)
4. praguepride ^(Talk) 13:13, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:16, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
6. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 05:06, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Could you find some way to replace one "Orn" in the intro?
  • No problem.
• You could also specify that he was killed on Coruscant and add a tiny bit of info on the YVW.
  • Sure think.
• Is it said if Orn was related to Korr's real or adoptive parents?
  • [Removed spoiler alert]; therefore, no.
• Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:55, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks again! Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:30, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

El Jefe

• One thing: You don't need to start the article off "The individual Orn was...", it's a pretty awkward way to do it. You could just cut those two words out and start with "Orn". IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:48, June 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Very well then, Jefe. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:30, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

1. CA available here. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:24, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

Emperor's Acvices

• There is a dupplicated link on the body. Should be fix.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 20:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Hi, which one do you think it is? I've been over the article three times, haha. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:45, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • I think lee removed it. It was the Kill link.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 22:43, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • I killed this one. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:39, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:06, June 27, 2014 (UTC)