Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Orn

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Orn

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:14, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tangentially connected to Project Video Games.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Sorry about the uncle. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 00:22, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
2. Even though the article will now like go to the GAN. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:02, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Mention his gender in the intro.
  • Uncle? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Orn was the uncle of the Human child Jaden Korr after his adoptive were killed in a shuttle accident: Something is missing here.
  • Zoinks. Fixed around. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Context for Yuuzhan Vong.
  • Contextified. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Maybe mention his death in the intro.
  • Sure, added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:33, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the look-over. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 11, 2014 (UTC)

Code-8

• Wrong heading for a character article
  • Oh yeeeaaahhh. Fixed.
• Can you fix the repetition of child in the first section of the bio
  • How's that?
• Please mention in the Bts that his species was unconfirmed
  • Indeed.
• As a child, Korr acquired a scar using one of his tools can you make it clearer that the tools belong to Orn
  • Sure thing.
• The Yuuzhan Vong War is linked to in the intro but not the bio. Same with the New Republic. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 09:11, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Both added, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:35, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
• Jedi Knight is also linked to in the intro and not the body. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 10:58, May 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • Yep. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:51, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

1. Over the word limit now. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:51, May 12, 2014 (UTC)