Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orlo

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Orlo

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 18:48, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Broom Boy 1986

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:54, March 23, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Nice work. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:24, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:42, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 22:04, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 22:01, April 9, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • Can we get context for bordok?
    • How's that look?
  • Context for Teebo and Kneesaa a Jari Kintaka? Are they more of Wicket's friends?
    • Yep, done.
  • In the skills and abilities quote, there is italicisation. Is this your own input, as if we don't know the spelling for Orlo's name I'm guessing there aren't any subtitles?
    • That's my own input. I'd be fine with removing it.
      • Cool. I've removed it in my copy-edit if that's okay.
  • I think the intro could be slightly expanded. Maybe mention Wicket quickly left the position or something? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 16:58, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
Ecks
  • I think you need to slightly trim the final bio paragraph. You have three consecutive sentences without any mention of Orlo. 1358 (Talk) 20:09, April 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • Got it down to two. - Cwedin(talk) 23:40, April 3, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I don't think we need to go out of our way to pretend that Orlo is not clearly intended to be male. He looks and sounds like a male. He even has a mustache. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:35, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fair enough. I wasn't sure if there was a precedent for that. - Cwedin(talk) 00:07, April 8, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:01, April 9, 2020 (UTC)