- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Order 65
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:11, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Add one and you get the destruction of the Jedi Order.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Add two and you get a pizza. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:58, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
- I chnaged "utilized" in the first sentence of the body to "in effect", as all the orders were obviously not used. MasterFred
(Whatever) 17:34, May 6, 2011 (UTC) 
Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:26, May 11, 2011 (UTC)- GTQ(Problems?) 00:15, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 00:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC) - 1358 (Talk) 17:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Moffship
The article doesn't really make it clear that the death of the Chancellor was a last resort; please mention this.- Added
"...deemed Supreme Chancellor Palpatine—the Supreme Commander of the Grand Army—unfit for duty, and if the Grand Army directly received Order 65, then the Grand Army was to immediately arrest or kill the Chancellor. Following this, command of the Grand Army of the Republic..." - a lot of "Grand Army"s here. Please change up the terms used here.- Replaced a few with GAR, an official nickname for the Grand Army.
- This is going to seem rather nitpicky, and I apologize in advance. For the most part, I'd rather not see acronyms used in place of the actual name. I was thinking more along the lines of "clone forces" or something similar. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 01:16, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
- It's fine Tranner. How does it sound now? Kilson(Let's have a chat) 09:55, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
- This is going to seem rather nitpicky, and I apologize in advance. For the most part, I'd rather not see acronyms used in place of the actual name. I was thinking more along the lines of "clone forces" or something similar. Grand Moff Tranner
- Replaced a few with GAR, an official nickname for the Grand Army.
Perhaps a note that Order 65 was never implemented would be appropriate for the History section.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 00:50, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Added, and thanks for the review man. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:28, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
One more thing: Does True Colors state that the "acting Chancellor" mentioned in the order is the Vice Chair?Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 11:08, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Hmmm....actually no. Poor assumption on my part. Corrected. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 00:10, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
I replaced "in effect" with "developed by" because stating Order 65 was "in effect" during the war was not true. Thanks though Fred. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 19:52, May 6, 2011 (UTC)