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Order 4
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:51, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Because the GAN needs more politics!
(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- JangFett (Talk) 22:25, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
- There are only 145 left. Go, go, go. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:38, May 31, 2011 (UTC)
- MasterFred
(Whatever) 18:45, May 31, 2011 (UTC)
—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, June 1, 2011, 00:59 UTC
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 16:05, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:03, June 1, 2011 (UTC)- I tried to remove some repetitive language; please make sure I didn't screw anything up. :) ~Savage
22:21, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
- No, you're edits were fine. Thanks for the review and the help Bob. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 22:29, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Jangsworth
"Order 4 was the fourth of 150 contingency orders created by the Grand Army of the Republic during the Clone Wars against the Confederacy of Independent Systems." To me, this sounds like Order 4, or the 150 orders, were created as a result from the CIS. Maybe it's the CIS mentioning in this sentence.- Eh, I guess I see what you mean. Removed the CIS mention.
- Nice :) JangFett (Talk) 15:19, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Jang. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:05, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:51, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Not an objection, but a pic of Palpy or Amedda might be helpful. ~Savage
22:22, June 2, 2011 (UTC)