Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ord Tiddell/Legends

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Ord Tiddell

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:34, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Now with stone mites!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Who needs Jedi. JangFett ^(Talk) 21:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
2. Xicer9^(Combadge) 21:24, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
3. I hope you mite consider writing more planet articles. --Imperialles 00:52, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
4. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 15:52, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
5. Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 03:38, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
6. Go for it. Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Also sprach Imperialles

• The Atlas clearly states that OR/D is the origin of the Ord name, but it's not stated that every Ord planet actually served as an OR/D. Thus, you should probably change it around to "named after the OR/Ds" or something. --Imperialles 00:35, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • I'm assuming you are referring to page 7, based on your reference in the Ord Lithone article. However, the Atlas doesn't say anything suggesting that some planets with the "Ord" prefix weren't Ordnance/Regional Depots. Unless you are referring to another page? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:43, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
    • No, page 7 is correct. I personally disagree with inferring A from B in this manner. --Imperialles 00:52, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Farlstendoiro. Tis the correct format?

• Hist: 1st paragraph should mention that the other mentioned words, Havricus and so, were also infested by stone mites. Currently it doesn't.
  • Done.
• BtS: Why do you link the word "article"? It's already linked under Appearances, and I think it's a policy to not do so
  • I really don't see any reason not to link to it. In fact, it's really no different from linking to any other source in a BTS section.
• There's a Klatooinian in the image. Was he a local? Did Ord Tiddell boast a population of Klatooinians? This guy should be mentioned somewhere in your article.
  • Nothing confirms he's an Ord Tiddell native, or that the planet had Klatooinians as part of its immigrated population. And I don't think mentioning him is important to this article.
• Strange new format. I miss the hash mark. Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:00, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:23, June 2, 2010 (UTC)