Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ord Enisence/Legends

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Ord Enisence

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:19, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 285 words.

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:52, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Good stuff.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:58, August 16, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:29, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Assuming CC's objections are dealt with. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:41, August 23, 2010 (UTC)
  5. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 10:59, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 23:38, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
  7. See comment below. -- 1358 (Talk) 18:20, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Apologies for the delay. CC7567 (talk) 05:12, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • Can the intro be expanded at all? I realize that there's only a scant amount of info on him, but stuff like his homeworld and the circumstances surrounding his death (namely, the fact that he was killed by the Separatists) can be used to expand it.
    • Addressed.
  • The fact that the TCWCE calls him "old" is worth noting somewhere, I'd say. Please incorporate it if possible.
    • Addressed.
  • From the episode guide: "Inside, Ord Enisence strolls into the Temple. Ahsoka greets him warmly, but Enisence only returns cold impatience. Ahsoka drops the matter, but Jocasta overhears the unusual outburst." I'd say that that is worth noting somewhere in the P&T—it's more reflective of his personality than the stuff currently there.
    • Actually, that was Parasitti who was impatient with Ahsoka. It has nothing to do with Enisence.
      • I do realize that, but the fact that Jocasta Nu found "his" impatience to be rather unusual (when Parasitti was impersonating him) might say something about him—maybe that he actually wasn't impatient when he had lived? You have the final call as to whether this is notable, but please see what you can do. CC7567 (talk) 20:49, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
        • I think it's a bit too extrapolatory, personally. You could just as easily say that Jedi in general are patient, or that Jedi should be comfortable with Nu's persistent demeanor by the late stages of their lives. Graestan(Talk) 23:40, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
          • I kinda agree with Grae here. I believe that if any Jedi reacted the way Enisence/Parasitti did it would be pretty unusual. (Well, except for Jorus maybe :P) QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:27, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
  • On that note, can a P&A section be established? Again, I realize that there isn't a lot of info on him, but the stuff in the P&T right now currently relates more to his abilities than his personality. Please see what you can do. Also, the fact that he possessed the required amount of knowledge and/or abilities to become a Jedi Master is worth noting in the P&A too.
    • The P&T changed to a P&A and expanded. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 11:42, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • Good to see this minor character getting promoted. CC7567 (talk) 22:01, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • Not an objection, but would it be possible to add the airdate of Holocron Heist to the Bts? -- 1358 (Talk) 18:20, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
    • I don't see why not. Added. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
      • Also, I doubt that it is self-sourcing; the epguide would probably be a good source. :-) -- 1358 (Talk) 19:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:12, August 30, 2010 (UTC)