Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orbital jumper

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Orbital jumper

  • Nominated by: Darth Culator (Talk) 22:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Wrote the damn thing a year ago, might as well get around to nominating it.

(4 ACs/5 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:07, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  2. JangFett (Talk) 23:51, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Nice. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 23:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Bah; forgot to vote. :P -- 1358 (Talk) 17:14, April 16, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Five user votes are totally helping. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 22:58, April 16, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:07, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 00:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
  8. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 00:55, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
  9. ACvote Maybe this can be snowballed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:26, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. The Jedi Council is bored:
    • "designed for short-range applications such as intercontinental travel or transit from the ground to orbital facilities such as space stations or skyhooks.": "such as" is repetitive.
    • Can the BTS be expanded slightly, specifically with a mention of what sources it's appeared or been mentioned in?
    • Otherwise, looks good. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 00:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  2. It lacks some kind of first mention/appearance template. -- 1358 (Talk) 12:27, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Any reason some of the specs are not provided mentions in the Characteristics? Specifically, price, atmospheric speed, repulsorlift-equipped? Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:27, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
      • Already mentioned the repulsorlifts, but just added the other whatsits. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:21, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • Preemptive review answers: CSWE adds nothing that's not in CTD. It's not mentioned outside the BFC trilogy. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 22:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
    • One more: It's 335 words. 343 if you count hyphenated words separately. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:19, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)