Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Operation Firestorm

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Operation Firestorm

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 23:37, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero. Love this quote.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:50, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:13, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:18, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
4. MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:38, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:50, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi

• "On the orders of the corrupted Jedi Master Tol Braga, who was working to ensure that the Sith Emperor received the necessary sacrifice of millions in order to start a dark ritual, teams of Sith and Imperial soldiers captured the headquarters of Gowix Corporation, the Korvalus Tower, and the Tyrelli Habitat in the Axial Park district of Corellia's capital Coronet City and set up Firestorm Turbolasers so they could turn Axial Park into a veritable inferno." Could you split up this sentence? It is way too long.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:06, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 15:39, October 4, 2013 (UTC)

Teh Frd

• The last sentence of the first paragraph in "The operation" just has too many commas, phrases, and clauses, in my opinion. Maybe split it up or reword it.
• I don't feel it's good practice to start a section with words like, "However." MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:25, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:23, October 29, 2013 (UTC)