Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ooris

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Ooris

• Nominated by: MasterFred(talk) 17:57, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Avoiding the use of "their" is difficult. Zed42 (talk) 10:14, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:33, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
3. A little funny seeing "the criminal" in the same paragraph as Han and Chewie. Immi Thrax (talk) 01:50, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni 19:21, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:42, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• Could you be slightly more explicit regarding Ooris's death?
• Quarantine is a Legends page for a different subject. I'm not sure if you intended to link to something else there.
• "The thief also showed no signs of mourning when the Dowutin counterparts met their demise at the hands of the smugglers." You should also note that Ooris was in fact relieved at having to split less of the reward when one Dowutin is killed.
• I believe Category:Clerical workers and assistants is appropriate here. Zed42 (talk) 22:42, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Good catch on that last one. All fixed. MasterFred(talk) 04:17, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
• The exact intent of Han and Chewbacca's job is only explicitly mentioned in the intro. That should be mentioned in the "Han Solo and Chewbacca arrived on a job" sentence in the body.
• The second intro paragraph solely uses "the assistant" twice in the first sentence, and uses Ooris's name twice in the next. Could you switch those uses up slightly? Zed42 (talk) 07:09, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Both fixed, though it's hard to come up with more words for someone who can't have pronouns. :P MasterFred(talk) 07:56, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:43, 4 March 2021 (UTC)