Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Omega's room

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Omega's room

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 17:30, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 19:12, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 500 words (69 introduction, 359 body, 72 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 463 words (70 introduction, 359 body, 34 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. CometSmudge (talk) 18:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 22:33, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 22:36, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:52, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 19:09, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • The Databank is used to source this as having Room capitalized; though the entry seems to present it as 'Omega's room.' Was curious if it was meant to be sourced elsewhere?—spookywillowwtalk 21:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Looks like it has been changed from its original form. You can see in the archived version that it was capitalized. I assume it should be changed to be lowercase now? Wok142 (talk) 00:03, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
      • Yeah if it's been changed then it should match what it is currently. Though it can be noted in the BtS that it formerly had it like that before they chose to change it (and the accompanying date that was done by).—spookywillowwtalk 00:05, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
        • Sounds good. Although how would I know the date of when it was changed? Wok142 (talk) 00:21, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
          • It's not a precise date; it'll have to be 'changed by X date.' similar to how this article notes that an article detailing something was posted, then it was changed at some point by a certain date to remove something; sorted by using webarchive dates and seeing the first saved instance that has it.—spookywillowwtalk 01:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
            • I think I did it right. Wok142 (talk) 00:51, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Zed
  • Since there are no other pages capitalized as Omega's room (currently a redirect to the other room), there's no need for the parenthetical disambiguator here and the page can simply exist at that title. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 01:24, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the Bad Batch S2 date ref can be shortened similarly to how it's done with the S3 note on recent nominations. (although evidently the wording would have to be a little different and just mention "Plan 99" specifically since the entire season doesn't have one set timeframe) Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 12:09, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Does that work? Wok142 (talk) 00:00, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • 18 BBY is only mentioned in the intro CometSmudge (talk) 21:25, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Her room also appears in the trailer, so that should be added as a source and mentioned in the BTS
  • 125 days doesn't seem right. The trivia for the Confined episode guide says she spends 164 days in the room, plus any additional days she spends there in the next episode. CometSmudge (talk) 21:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Handled all. Wok142 (talk) 00:51, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
  • The trailer needs a full date
  • Could you change the wording of the BTS a bit? I know what you mean, but it looks like you're saying it had two different first appearances.
  • Is Ord Mantell being a planet citable to Confined? I didn't check the whole episode, but it seems unlikely. CometSmudge (talk) 19:56, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Ah good call about Ord Mantell. I've cleaned these up. For the trailer, I used the word "pictured" instead of "appearing" - let me know if it makes sense this way. Wok142 (talk) 02:07, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Sorry for not doing these all at once but I think this is my last one: The Lurca kennels seem notable and there's a redlink for them on the Confined page, so that page should be created and linked. CometSmudge (talk) 16:59, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
    • No worries! I've created the page. Wok142 (talk) 17:38, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:12, 2 July 2024 (UTC)