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Oggem Baobab
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:20, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: First Droids GAN
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Support
- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:19, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:12, 6 January 2022 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 08:09, 18 January 2022 (UTC) 
MasterFred(talk) 09:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)- LucaRoR (Talk) 10:50, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
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Manoof
Is this sentence missing something at the end? "Oggem told his story of the ship crashing and the Roonstones he had found, happy to finally be able to share his dream with." Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- Yup.
His ship should be noted in his equipment section Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- Added.
You should mention that the clues led Mungo and the droids to the Roon Sea, where they then got caught in a whirlpool. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- Added.
I think you should also mention somewhere that it was thought his ship was haunted Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- It wasn't really thought to be haunted, it was just a spooky, dark ship that scared 3PO.
- So just double checked and re-animated part 2 says "His reinvigorated search brought him and the droids to a ruined spacecraft, believed by some to be haunted." so it definitely needs to be noted. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:53, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Next time, for this type of objection, I'd recommend mentioning which source you're referring to, since that wasn't clear here. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:28, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- So just double checked and re-animated part 2 says "His reinvigorated search brought him and the droids to a ruined spacecraft, believed by some to be haunted." so it definitely needs to be noted. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 22:53, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- It wasn't really thought to be haunted, it was just a spooky, dark ship that scared 3PO.
Droids re-animated notes that Oggem identifies himself to be Mungo's great-uncle, but the article notes that, per the episode, Mungo came to this conclusion himself. Is this a continuity issue to be noted in BTS or is one or the other correct? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- Oggem tells Mungo his name, which Mungo recognizes as his great-uncle's, so the article isn't 100% correct, but it's so close that we'd be splitting hairs if we note it as an error.
If he's a prospector, is that sufficient to say he is a miner (for categorisation)? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)- Sure. Thanks for the review. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:23, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
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There's definitely enough quotes from the episode for each section- Lol no idea how I forgot to add those. Done.
His poor eyesight can be mentioned in the P&TCommander Code-8 Hello There! 12:37, 4 January 2022 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:02, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Is the Starlog article exempt from the sources list because it's not a fully licenced source? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:21, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:53, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:07, 18 January 2022 (UTC)