- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Odin Nesloor
- Nominated by: --Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 16:35, November 22, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments:Moved up from CAN. Project The Phantom Menace: Wookieepedia's Third Barn-burner's first GAnom.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Eidolons of Eternal Life! Eidolons of infinite Power! Arise from the sixteen year sleep! Depart after the sixteen year wait! Let there be light! Let there be life! The time has come! The time is now! Come forth! Odin, warrior of the dark! Menkooroo 09:40, November 28, 2011 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)- I have sacrificed much to achieve peace. So too must a new generation sacrifice to maintain that peace. Responsibility! Duty! Honour! These are not mere virtues to which we must aspire! They are essential to every soldier, to every king! Hanzo Hasashi 19:34, November 29, 2011 (UTC)
- Blue Valkyrie shot the potion! ~Savage
11:50, December 1, 2011 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
Object
To Valhalla
Sorry, I missed this on the CAN page. Saying that he worked "alongside" geniuses and experts is worded to definitely exclude him from that group, but the Vis-dic leaves open the possibility that he's one of 'em too. Can you use a more inclusive word?Menkooroo 13:30, November 23, 2011 (UTC)- Taken care of. Thanks for the first GAN Barn-burner review, Menk. :) --Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 16:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
- Taken care of. Thanks for the first GAN Barn-burner review, Menk. :) --Cal Jedi
Prepare to be savaged…
Just one thing: His physical description should probably be moved down to "Personality and traits." ~Savage 12:48, November 30, 2011 (UTC)- Moved.--Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 23:27, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
- Moved.--Cal Jedi
Toprawa
As a preliminary objection, I think we can just ax the part in the intro about him having brown hair and fair skin. Seems kind of inconsequential for that section, and I'm guessing it's just a leftover relic from when it was going for CAN.Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:17, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
Post-vote objection
I feel like "Human male" should be at the beginning of the bio per overwhelming precedent.--Menkooroo 04:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)- Added.--Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 04:54, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Why was that moved down into P & T anyhow? I don't understand why some do that, species and gender does not qualify for personality and traits. Hanzo Hasashi 05:00, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
- I think it was mistakenly moved down when he moved hair and skin colour down per Bob's objection. In any case, it's all good now and ready for archiving, baby! --Menkooroo 07:55, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Why was that moved down into P & T anyhow? I don't understand why some do that, species and gender does not qualify for personality and traits. Hanzo Hasashi 05:00, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Added.--Cal Jedi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)