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Obumubo
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:56, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another Operation Ringbreaker victim for the list of Alexander Freed geography.
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Support
- —spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- — Samonic
10:36, 10 April 2022 (UTC) 
Imperators II(Talk) 17:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:33, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:19, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
Object
Spooky
Is it worth noting the climate as cold in the infobox?"..in order to open a vacancy for an Imperial Military figure to be promoted to from the Kuat Drive Yards." I see the the wording "to be promoted to" in the intro, but upon reading it became confusing as to what they'd be promoted to. I'm assuming it means to have someone transferred there, but perhaps the sentence could be slightly tweaked; to have that third 'to' removed or something otherwise, not sure.- Both addressed.
From a novel spot-search of Rimma I came up with: "Governor Chalis and her infantry company were striking soft targets along the Rimma Trade Route..."; if they're doing the campaign along the route, would it be fair to say that it could be added to |routes=, and have the 'along' reflected in the body? Seems like with their sights set on eventually Sullust they're going down the route and attacking places, rather than just being near it.- Now this is something I've gone back and forth from, and I'll explain why. When I went to look at the placing of targets that were more established in Canon, I found that while Sullust was on the Rimma, Xagobah was along a small route just off of it. Meaning "along the Rimma" isn't entirely accurate. It also comes to say that Chalis said "indirect route" in her proposal of Operation Ringbreaker. Thus I have made the decision to take "along the Rimma" with a grain of salt as I have done with all the Ringbreaker targets without proper mapping. If Xagobah is only near the route then other targets could be the same.
- Ah, I see; thanks for the explanation.—spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- Now this is something I've gone back and forth from, and I'll explain why. When I went to look at the placing of targets that were more established in Canon, I found that while Sullust was on the Rimma, Xagobah was along a small route just off of it. Meaning "along the Rimma" isn't entirely accurate. It also comes to say that Chalis said "indirect route" in her proposal of Operation Ringbreaker. Thus I have made the decision to take "along the Rimma" with a grain of salt as I have done with all the Ringbreaker targets without proper mapping. If Xagobah is only near the route then other targets could be the same.
Perhaps Category:Oceanic moons?—spookywillowwtalk 05:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)- Added. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:19, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Should "siege cannon" get its own article?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:46, 19 April 2022 (UTC)- Voila. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:08, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:19, 24 April 2022 (UTC)