Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/OS-72-10

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OS-72-10

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:15, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: None.

(5 ACs/3 Users/ 8Total)

Support

1. More extras. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 20:17, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:34, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
3. Allright. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:48, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 21:32, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
5. Random extras ftw. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
6. Quick n' clean. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 19:08, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
7. Cylka^-talk- 23:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)
8. Grunny (talk) 03:03, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Lee
   • Could the intro be shortened so that it is proportional to the bio ?
     • As it is, there is virtually no information on the character. Shortening the intro would cut out relevant information and significantly reduce the word count.
   • Good work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:28, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:50, March 31, 2010 (UTC)
2. Just one: could you mention somewhere in the bio that "OS-72-10" was his designation, since you say so in the intro? Great work, as usual. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 18:22, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
   • Done. Thanks for reading through it, Jon. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 18:55, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:03, April 4, 2010 (UTC)