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Noolan

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 01:49, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:39, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 05:17, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:11, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 01:27, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ~SavageBOB sig 05:16, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Moffship
  • Throughout the article, you make reference to the Noolan's homeworld, yet you list the Noola system as the "homeworld" in the infobox. Is there not enough information for an "Unidentified Noolan homeworld" article? If that is the case, I would suggest rewording every mention of the Noolan homeworld for clarity.
  • Always nice to review an article on an obscure species. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 01:45, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
    • Cheers, Tranner. I have modified the article to refer only to the system. --Eyrezer 11:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged…
  • In the intro, can you give context on Homanan Nana and Jedi Force crystal?
  • Also, during the intro, her Rebelness comes out of nowhere. Can you mention it earlier?
    • Changed the first reference to Nana. Should cover the first part of the previous objection too.
  • Pretty petty, I know, but I think you should add a B&A section that lists the fact that they had females. It is biology after all! :)
    • Done.
  • Also, context on Jedi Force crystal in the body.
    • The OS just has a bald mention, with no explanation of what the crystal is/how it works. WHat context did you have in mind?
      • What they are would be nice, but looks like that's not possible. :) ~SavageBOB sig 06:00, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Also, probably worth mentioning the female's Rebel-ship upon first mention, rather than after her new powers.
    • I tend to think that the powers is of greater significance to the article topic. It may relate to something endemic to the Noolan, although that is never specifed. Nana's rebelness, on the other hand, is incidental to the species, especially as she is not originally a Noolan. --11:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
  • Does the OS give the plural as "Noolan" and not "Noolans"? Any reason to suppose it's one and not the other? (If it doesn't list the plural, perhaps a mention of this in BTS or the notes would be in order.) ~SavageBOB sig 05:07, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
    • Will check on this one. --Eyrezer 11:24, May 27, 2011 (UTC)
      • How does this look? --Eyrezer 05:09, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
        • That's cool. If it were me, I'd err on the side of assuming they follow standard English plural rules (Noolans), but it's fine as is. Nice work. ~SavageBOB sig 05:16, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:46, May 29, 2011 (UTC)