Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Niru

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Niru

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:31, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Catty.
  • Date Archived: 20:14, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 679 words (123 introduction, 515 body, 41 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Nice work, see my comments below. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:57, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:25, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:34, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
  4. Lewisr (talk) 13:35, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
  5. Panther436 (talk) 18:38, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Dani
  • The images, particulary the one in Personality and traits, are rather small. I'm not certain Personality and traits is large enough for a proper image. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 10:39, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
    • I've rearranged the images and upped the size and you're absolutely right, it looks much better now. OtterSurf (talk) 11:01, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like 2-3 more sentences could be added to buff out the intro, seems very brief.
    • I've expanded it a little to cover the article more comprehensively.
  • Image captions for the article should indicate which character is Niru, usually by saying (center) or (right) etc, depending on the image.
    • Seems like one could work it out based on the main image, but whatever. Added. OtterSurf (talk) 08:14, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
      • It's more of a recent precedent for sure, but mostly helpful for those who haven't read a source.—spookywillowwtalk 01:36, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • "Tension in the Cantros system" seems to have a decent number of run-on sentences to be broken up. Unsure how you'd want go about splitting some of those.
    • I've had a go. Might need some tweaking but it should read better now.
  • Leaving an objection as I'd like to know if the gender can be verified, as a lot of those older comics don't indicate gender, and we now don't use pronouns/appearance to indicate it.—spookywillowwtalk 20:53, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
    • See the comments section. OtterSurf (talk) 08:09, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The intro shouldn't be pipelinking the names of some of the characters seeing as they aren't conjecturally titled
  • If there's any context for Han, Luke, and Leia being present I'd like to see that mentioned in the biography Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:14, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • "her faction's members, Durne, had been manipulating events" Member singular is needed here, also the intro needs to clarify that Durne was manipulating things so they were attacking a fellow rebel group. Fan26 (Talk) 17:09, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • With regards to Niru's gender and pronouns, only the "her" pronoun is ever used. Han also uses the appellation "sister" when addressing her. OtterSurf (talk) 09:23, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Here's my copy-edit – it's mostly comma fixes, en dashes (see WP:MOS#Hyphens and dashes), and including trailing letters within pipelinks per WP:MOS#Formatting_3 (ie [[Vine/Legends|vines]] instead of [[Vine/Legends|vine]]s). JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:57, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
    • That's actually clarified a few things for me, so many thanks! OtterSurf (talk) 20:06, 30 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:10, 17 June 2023 (UTC)