Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nightsister Matriarch

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Nightsister Matriarch

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Going through Elite Squadron, working on minor characters.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. This damn games should give a timeline. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:04, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
2. QuiGon never disappoints. Ever.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 00:29, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
3. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:13, October 11, 2010 (UTC)
4. ~ SavageBob 20:02, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
5. Grunny (talk) 03:10, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Lee attacks

• Soon enough, POV?
  • I don't see the problem here. It means that Grey Squadron arrived soon after the Nightsisters attacked the base, which was just the case. There's nothing POV about that.
• No approximate date for the infobox?
  • No, not really. The game is very vague on the dating. All that we know for sure is that the battle occurred while the New Republic was in power. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:38, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
• Otherwise nice. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:33, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

• Prepare to be savaged...
  • Just one thing: This sentence is pretty long and full of clauses upon clauses: "She was in charge of the Nightsisters who overran a cloning facility established on the planet by the Imperial warlord X1, who, by that time, had fled the planet." Could it be chopped into two segments or so? Otherwise, looks great. ~ SavageBob 21:20, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
    • Reworded. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 19:35, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:10, October 18, 2010 (UTC)