- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Nemrileo irm-Drocubac
- Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:50, July 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Been too long since I nommed anything. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:50, July 17, 2020 (UTC)
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Support
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Tommy
Not all of the issues raised in the GAR have been fixed. One of the BBY dates is still sourced to The Approaching Storm and the BTS still has the unnecessary last sentence.Tommy-Macaroni 16:37, July 17, 2020 (UTC)- Both done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:25, July 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Now all of the first portion of the first history paragraph is being sourced to a date note. Please add a regular ref before, so just the date is being sourced to the date note. You also have a stray period from when you removed the BTS stuff. Tommy-Macaroni 21:14, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Both done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:32, August 3, 2020 (UTC)
- Now all of the first portion of the first history paragraph is being sourced to a date note. Please add a regular ref before, so just the date is being sourced to the date note. You also have a stray period from when you removed the BTS stuff. Tommy-Macaroni 21:14, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Both done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:25, July 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Please make sure all parts of manual ref notes are linked, as they would be in the body. Also watch your punctuation in ref notes, as some are missing periods or italicisation.
- I believe that's all, let me know if I've missed any.
- Duplicate link.
- Fixed.
- Are the agents mentioned actually Agents (note capitalisation)? As in, do they hold the rank of Agent, or are they just referred to as "Separatist agents" or something? If it's the latter, the link to Agent/Legends needs to be removed.
- Double checked, and removed the link.
- Please refrain from using "though"; the more formal "although" is preferred.
- Fixed.
- In the second biography paragraph, irm-Drocubac is only mentioned by name in the first two sentences. All mentions after this are by "his" or "him." Please swap out some of these pronouns for clarity.
- Done. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:57, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
- Do we need two refs for the end of the bio? All the info seems simple, so I think a single ref should suffice.
- Please use the Oxford comma. Tommy-Macaroni 20:27, August 6, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
Unaddressed comments from me over ten days old. I have no idea why these really easy objections weren't satisfied along with the others, and indeed I left some extra time for the nominator to get them, but for whatever reason they haven't been seen to, and the rules are the rules. Tommy-Macaroni 11:40, August 18, 2020 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:42, August 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 12:35, August 18, 2020 (UTC)