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Nelvaan

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 22:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Update brought it over 250 words.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:24, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
  2. Nice job. Fan26 (Talk) 14:44, July 2, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, July 9, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:54, July 9, 2019 (UTC)
  5. User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 21:03, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • "The Techno Union, members of the Confederacy, experimented on the peaceful natives, turning them into mindless cyborg monstrosities" — I suppose this is meant to refer to the natives of Nelvaan. Could you please specify that? Imperators II(Talk) 08:02, June 27, 2019 (UTC)
  • Please add to BTS info about the first full-fledged appearance of Nelvaan/Legends. Imperators II(Talk) 12:47, July 2, 2019 (UTC)
    • Done. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 23:40, July 3, 2019 (UTC)
      • I think the better thing to do here would be to ref most of the stuff to the specific episode and only reference the release date to some other source. Imperators II(Talk) 21:22, July 8, 2019 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You don't actually specify that Rodia is also in the Savareen sector. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:13, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
    • Good point. Clarified. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 21:07, June 28, 2019 (UTC)
      • Just a heads up, your IRC objection related to this has been addressed. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:10, July 9, 2019 (UTC)
Fan
  • A text search for Nelvaan in Labyrinth of Evil turns up two results, both of which appear to be mentions. Both this article's BtS and the Legends article's Appearances mark it as actually appearing-is this google book omitting a passage, making both articles correct, or was there a mistake in the Legends article? Fan26 (Talk) 03:41, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
    • That’s a mistake I noticed years ago but completely forgot about. Nice catch. Fixed on both articles. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 12:41, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:08, July 9, 2019 (UTC)