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Needle (maneuver)
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:24, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One cool feature of Alphabet Squadron's rivalry with the 204th is recognising the closer enemies, and their habits, along the way.
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Copy-edit, mostly for flow and conciseness. OOM 224 15:57, 28 June 2022 (UTC)- Samonic
16:25, 28 June 2022 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:17, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 08:41, 3 August 2022 (UTC)- Nicely done.TK-462 (talk) 22:20, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
Object
Samonic's Needle (not a maneuver)
Everything that can be linked should be linked.— Samonic 13:55, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- I found one extra thing worth linking, but I'd recommend you specify what you think I missed, since I'm not seeing the same picture as you are here. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:58, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- Indeed. My bad, after all, linking is a "sofixit" (or something) or so I have read.— Samonic 18:52, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
- Indeed. My bad, after all, linking is a "sofixit" (or something) or so I have read.— Samonic
- I found one extra thing worth linking, but I'd recommend you specify what you think I missed, since I'm not seeing the same picture as you are here. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:58, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Why is the {{Nickname}} template missing? Is the official name of this maneuver the "Needle," or just a nickname? I thought that the nickname template should be used when the official names are not used.Samonic 17:43, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
- You are correct, fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:09, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
The image of the 204th needs cropping.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:21, 25 July 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Special thanks to Dentface. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:35, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
CC-8
"would demolish an enemy starfighter, ensuring it had nowhere to go." This reads as though the maneuver involves destroying the fighter in order to prevent it from leaving, please reword.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:10, 3 August 2022 (UTC)- I may have gotten this during my copy-edit. Imperators II(Talk) 08:41, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:00, 6 August 2022 (UTC)