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Neddoo
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:47, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: More Ewoks
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS
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Support
Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)- OOM 224 17:37, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 04:14, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 15:33, 26 September 2021 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:44, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
Object
Ayre
You should establish what the effects of the loonee bird are when you first mention it and Teebo.Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:25, 3 September 2021 (UTC)- Added.
I think you can be a little more specific about Neddoo's clothing in the equipment section.Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:25, 3 September 2021 (UTC)- How's that? Also, took the liberty of giving you a section header :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:44, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan
"Neddoo needed to once again repair his hut" This is the first mention of him having to repair his hut in the article, and it implies this is not the first time he has had to do so. Either this needs to be reworded or the article should mention that he had to repair it before.Fan26 (Talk) 18:24, 13 September 2021 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:06, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
There's a typo in the Biography quote, is that straight from the comic?UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:43, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
- Nope, that's on me, nice catch. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:56, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:44, 26 September 2021 (UTC)