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Nadaa
- Nominated by: SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:31, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 02:31, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 463 words (92 introduction, 252 body, 119 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP: KOTOR
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Support
Nice work, looking forward to more! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:53, 29 June 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 02:26, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 02:36, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 19:38, 30 June 2023 (UTC) - Nice work on this! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
Object
Fan
- (Reviewing Note) Welcome to the GAN!
The intro says Surik was unsuccessful twice- Fixed SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:29, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
- This has created a run-on sentence; please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed the sentence. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 18:06, 12 June 2023 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 19:02, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
- This has created a run-on sentence; please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:29, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
There's room enough for a picture of a related subject in the bio-I'd recommend her daughter since that's the most directly relevant to Nadaa as a character- This needs a caption. Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
- My mistake, caption added. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:59, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
- This needs a caption. Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
The intro provides too much context for Saquesh while the bio provides too little-these should be swapped. The intro can just identify Saquesh as an Exchange boss while the bio explains he oversaw the Refugee SectorFan26 (Talk) 14:13, 30 May 2023 (UTC)- Fixed SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:29, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
- (Reviewing Note) Please do not strike others' objections on your own articles; it is not the place of the nominator but rather the objector to determine if the objection has been satisfied or not-in this case the first objection was not quite fully satisfied and I un-struck it. Thanks. Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
This made more sense in the body, but it's a little confusing to say that Surik was unsuccessful but still freed Adana: "Surik was unsuccessful and killed Saquesh to free Adana."JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:16, 23 June 2023 (UTC)- Added context. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 04:16, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
Last thing, I'm a little confused by your use of "weary" here: "she was weary of the prospect of Saquesh finding her daughter".JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:57, 26 June 2023 (UTC)- I Put weary instead of wary, thanks for noticing. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 02:21, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
About [[Refugee/Legends|Nar Shaddaa refugees]] in the infobox, is there really some sort of faction of refugees that Naada is affiliated with, or is she just one of the refugees living on Nar Shaddaa? If it's the latter, I think it should be removed.- Removed. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 02:16, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
Does the game clearly specify Nadaa and Saquesh's genders since pronouns don't always indicate gender? Even some simple gendered terms (like man, woman, mother, etc.) would suffice. At least for Saquesh, you can source him being male to CSWE if the game doesn't say that. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:54, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
- Adana refers to Nadaa as "mom," I think that's enough to identify her as female. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- Indeed. Any luck with Saquesh as well? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:25, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- CSWE says he's a man. Surprisingly, it says nothing about him being a Quarren. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 23:27, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- Sourcing Saquesh's gender to the game is the preferable solution since it wouldn't require an extra reference, but if the game does not provide that information, you should either source it to CSWE or remove "male" since it's not relevant for the Nadaa article.
- Added CSWE source SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 01:09, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Sourcing Saquesh's gender to the game is the preferable solution since it wouldn't require an extra reference, but if the game does not provide that information, you should either source it to CSWE or remove "male" since it's not relevant for the Nadaa article.
- Also, since CSWE states that the Exile did help Nadaa, is the 100% banner needed? SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 00:45, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- If that's how the events mentioned in that section play out when the player chooses to help, I'd say you can remove the banner. Though it'd be nice to note in Behind the Scenes that CSWE supports this particular scenario from the game. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:55, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- Done. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 01:35, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
- If that's how the events mentioned in that section play out when the player chooses to help, I'd say you can remove the banner. Though it'd be nice to note in Behind the Scenes that CSWE supports this particular scenario from the game.
- CSWE says he's a man. Surprisingly, it says nothing about him being a Quarren. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 23:27, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- Indeed. Any luck with Saquesh as well?
- Adana refers to Nadaa as "mom," I think that's enough to identify her as female. SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 20:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- (Reviewing note) Most books, such as the CSWE, include the release year information in itself, therefore no need for additional references. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:25, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to strike objection (AC only)
- For Fan's objection. LucaRoR (Talk) 19:00, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 19:01, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 19:02, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:31, 3 July 2023 (UTC)