Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nadaa

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Nadaa

• Nominated by: OLIOSTER ^(talk) 20:32, December 10, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Quarren stole mah baby!

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Almost forgot to support. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:08, December 23, 2010 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:39, December 30, 2010 (UTC)
3. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:26, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
4. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:08, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
5. Grunny (talk) 05:03, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Moffship

• In the intro: "Saquesh planned to sell Adana to the Hutts." - could you expand on this, or make it more relevant to Nadaa? Right now, its inclusion just seems odd to me.
• Bio: Aside from the lone mention of the Refugee Sector, you don't mention that Nadaa is a refugee.
• As opposed to the intro, when referencing the unpaid debt in the bio, you don't mention that it was Nadaa's debt. Please fix this.
• Similarly to the last objection, Saquesh's plan to sell Adana into slavery is currently exclusive to the intro.
• No more quotes? No other info on her from talking to other refugees? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:53, December 20, 2010 (UTC)
  • This should all be addressed now. Didn't find any other info about her. Hussef only mentions her specifically after you've completed the quest and it was nothing new and the random nameless refugees just mention Adana was kidnapped. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 01:21, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Xd1358

• I feel that the intro could be condensed just a little bit. Perhaps remove this sentence: "Saquesh planned to sell Adana to the Hutts to recoup the debt.", as it isn't directly relevant to Nadaa?
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 16:20, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
• No P&T? 1358 ^(Talk) 21:15, December 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • I can't really think of anything to add to a P&T section. Any suggestions? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 16:20, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
    • At least you can use the first quote and "Nadaa was extremely grateful and thanked the Exile.". That would be sufficient IMO. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:35, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
      • Good? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 01:46, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
        • Cool. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:26, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

UD

• Any reason there's a space between the ellipses and the ensuing word in this quote? "The Overseer… Saquesh… he took my daughter to sell to the Hutts. He took my daughter… Adana, to sell to the Hutts." Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:20, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
  • Copied and pasted straight from the dialog.tlk file. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:05, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • Figured, just checking. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:08, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
      • Checked it again, Adana's name was not in the quote, fixed :P. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:10, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:03, January 7, 2011 (UTC)