Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Myleena Dystra

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Myleena Dystra

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:39, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Coruscant-related and police-related article, perfect combo.

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Stake black msg 19:02, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Supreme Emperor (talk) 21:03, April 25, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 08:15, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:56, May 7, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:35, May 9, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Winterz (talk) 01:16, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 07:55, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
  8. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:32, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Slow-roasted at the stake

*"when her parents were arrested as Alliance to Restore the Republic". I don't know what you mean there.

    • I don't know either... Done.
  • Beef up that Bts, ma man! Context on H&R, is it a book? a comic series? Who wrote it? Who was the artist that illustrated Dystra's pretty face?
    • I don't really have an author for the section on her but I did add the other info I had.
  • Sources call for {{1stm}} instead of {{1st}}, even if the subject is pictured. I don't know why either, but I've had this objection presented to me a lot of times.
    • Huh, ok.
  • Does the source say "unnecessary risks"? If not, please remove, as that is a POV.
    • Yes, the exact quote is "Her enthusiasm could be her undoing as she takes unnecessary risks and short cuts to make her collar."
  • Please present a source indicating 13 BBY was a golden Imperial era.
    • Word changed.
  • Context on Coruscant, appropriately sourced.
    • I thought "planet" was context?
  • Context on and link to the dissolution of the Imperial Senate, ideally with a date if possible.
    • Added.
  • Context on the Rebel Alliance, COMPNOR, stormtroopers, New Order, Alliance Special Operations and New Republic.
    • Done.
  • "determined to do justice for the cause that her parents had believed in." Didn't she believe in the cause too? This should be included. Maybe you could also reword as "she was determined to do justice for the cause her parents died for" or something of the sort.
    • Wording adjusted
  • "Twice Dystra found herself in dangerous actions during which she was wounded." This could use some rewording.
    • Done.
  • You can also describe her attire somewhere in the article.
    • I'm not sure how I can incorporate that smoothly. And the image doesn't really show if its a police uniform she has on or just regular clothes.
      • You could mention she wore goggles sometimes in the Personality and traits section. Stake black msg 16:17, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
        • I did find a reference to a uniform so both have been added. Coruscantfan (Talk) 18:48, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • For now that's it. Stake black msg 16:08, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
No stakes involved
  • The "briefly" in the infobox must be decapitalized.
    • Done.
  • The "young" assessment, does that say in the source or was it you who assumed it through her appearance?
  • Reload infobox. Winterz (talk) 12:45, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
  • First appearance in Sources?! Winterz (talk) 15:38, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
    • Yep, so... are you wanting it removed? Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:05, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
      • He means it should be {{1stm}}, since it's a source. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 05:33, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
        • Oh, got it, changed. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 05:36, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
          • Considering this, changes should reflect on the Bts as well ;)
  • Try to avoid pipelinking like the "Rebel Alliance" case in the infobox, sir. Winterz (talk) 11:20, April 16, 2013 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Even though we all know it the article doesn't clearly say that the Rebels became the new republic somewhere in there. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 23:11, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Could there be an article for the Dystra estate?
    • Done.
  • Article for the readjustment camp?
    • Done.
  • Also, perhaps for the foster home? IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:16, April 30, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Sorry for intervening in this section :p, but the Rebel safeworld should receive one too. Winterz (talk) 17:48, April 30, 2013 (UTC)
The Cav-Man cometh
  • Okay; Dystra's bio on pg. 127 of Heroes and Rogues has all her stats listed. These should be translated into her skill set and applied to her PT. For an example of how this can be achieved see here. Also, there is equipment listed in the stats that is not mentioned in the article, such as her Y-wing and droid, etc.
    • Done.
  • The image; I see you correlated Dystra's bio as an NRSF agent with the example bio given earlier in the book for a typical agent. Am I right in assuming that the image is not explicitly stated to be Dystra? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:03, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • I went back and looked and there isn't a caption, no. Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:23, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
      • Then unfortunately I don't think we can equate the two. Heroes and Rogues provides separate art for some profiled characters which departs from the generic profile. I think removing the image would be the best course of action. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:55, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
        • I was afraid you were going to suggest that. I removed the image as well as the information from the infobox and p&t related to the image. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:52, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:55, June 6, 2013 (UTC)