- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Murttoc Yine
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:09, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Word count went above 200 when I found out he was visible in the RotJ film, and then the intro made it over 250.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- No issues.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:28, September 15, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 01:43, September 18, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 21:00, September 23, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:41, September 26, 2013 (UTC)- Bo Shuda (talk) 10:58, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 20:58, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Cav
The BTS part about his scene being cut, then another scene added where he was visible - can we get some elaboration on where these scenes were in relation to the film?- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 10:21, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:17, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
"Shortly afterward, Jabba dropped his slave dancer Oola into the pit of his rancor." As is, this doesn't seem particularly relevant to Yine. Was he present when this happened? Please clarify.1358 (Talk) 20:41, September 26, 2013 (UTC)- Well we don't see him when this happens, but as he was visible during the music performance before this happened, I just wrote that thing because I think he would have still been there, though not onscreen. Should I just remove it? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:48, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
- Cut, as it was not truly necessary. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:58, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
- Well we don't see him when this happens, but as he was visible during the music performance before this happened, I just wrote that thing because I think he would have still been there, though not onscreen. Should I just remove it? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:48, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:58, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
- Is it worth mentioning in the article that he witnessed the Max Rebo Band's performance of Lapti Nek/Jedi Rocks from onstage and that he was in the company of the Unidentified Human female? Or is this too similar to our discussion on name dropping? Bo Shuda (talk) 23:53, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think the first is necessary, based on reading the Laudica article. The second is also not needed either. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:57, September 8, 2013 (UTC)