Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mupple pie

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Mupple pie

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:31, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The one and only pie from Droids
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(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:49, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
2. VergenceScatter (talk) 01:18, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:20, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:01, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
5. MasterFred(talk) 11:41, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
6. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:41, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Could you add a bit more context to Baobab's? Perhaps merchant.
• I'd switch the quote in description with the quote in the intro. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:52, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:04, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

• The last History sentence is a bit confusing. I'm presuming the security guards pursued and arrested the Yomms, but it's not entirely clear from this sentence: "However, they were quickly run down and apprehended by Baobab." 1358 ^(Talk) 09:33, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
  • It was actually Mungo who pursued the guards, hopefully it's clearer now. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:59, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Hmm, you'd think security guards would be the ones doing the apprehending. :P 1358 ^(Talk) 16:01, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• After reading through the article, the guards appear to have plot significance that would warrant them their own articles. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:44, 22 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Created one for the guy with notable dialogue, the other one just has a simple affirmation. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:39, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:41, 26 January 2022 (UTC)