Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Morlimur Snugg

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Morlimur Snugg

• Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 01:35, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: That's no Muun
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. OOM 224 10:04, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:20, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
3. I really love how detailed the BTS is. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 21:21, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:39, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
5. MasterFred(talk) 07:47, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Grammatical error in the last sentence of the intro
  • I believe that took care of it?
    • Yup, that's better OOM 224 15:10, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
• There's no need to repeat his species between the Biography and the P&T
• "From" shouldn't be linked to homeworld, since it's a preposition. Also, context should be given to Cybloc XII; something like "the world" would do.
• Feral was also Maul's brother, so no need for commas around Savage Opress
• It's best not to combine physical attributes with personality in the P&T section in a sentence, so I suggest moving the height info to the next sentence
• I don't see a need to mention Hondo in the BTS
• First part of the second paragraph in the Design section: I think it can just be shortened to something to the effect of "A first pass character concept of Snugg for The Clone Wars show that the character's lower body and head were sourced from […]" OOM 224 13:45, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
  • The rest have been dealt with as well. DwartiiDelver (talk) 14:29, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Context on Katt Mol would be appreciated. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:41, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:13, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Quite good. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:20, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• I'm not really seeing a reason for the date ref to mention 22 BBY. Doesn't seem necessary to the math. MasterFred(talk) 22:55, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Definitely not—removed that from the ref. DwartiiDelver (talk) 23:05, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:47, 19 October 2021 (UTC)