Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Morley (second nomination)

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Morley

  • Nominated by: Sicaptain (talk) 17:43, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 12:06, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1100 words (124 introduction, 871 body, 105 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 797 words (123 introduction, 569 body, 105 behind the scenes)
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Support

Object

Dani
  • Make sure to add the pronoun field as well as source the character's and others' pronoun usages in the body of the article. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 17:50, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
    • If I am not mistaking, then this should be done. Sicaptain (talk) 19:12, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Review Note: Just making sure you're aware of the unaddress objections on the first nomination. I think a comment below would be good to signify if/when you address them.NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 17:50, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • Lotho Minor needs context in the introduction
    • Done.
  • The date note for 32 BBY and 20 BBY should be reworked to be in chronological order, and there's a bit missing from that note about the 20 BBY date
    • Chronological order is done, but could you tell me what is missing or fix it yourself?
      • Just needs to state clearly that Opress finds Maul in "Brothers" should have been clearer on that
  • Is there any more that could be clarified about the victims that were brought to Maul?
    • Done.
  • Biography has room for another image
    • Done.
      • I think there's plenty of options from the episode that show Morley much more clearly, eg his intervention with the junker or his death scene. There's users like JMAS who can help with that
  • There's a few spots that need to utilize the available details, eg when Morley attacks one of the junkers, specify how Morley attacked
    • Done in my opinion.
  • Is Morely viewing Maul as his master backed up in the episode or in any of the sources?
    • Brothers Episode Gallery picture 8 text.
      • That should definitely be used as the source then
        • It's not just in the episode gallery. Morley calls him his master in the episode. See the quote I added to the P&t section. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 04:42, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
          • Than that should be done with the reference to the Episode itself. Sicaptain(Talk) 09:08, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Specify why Opress was still alive in Maul's lair by mentioning what he had been doing down there
    • Done.
      • I was meaning more about how Opress had found Maul and trying to help him remember Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:44, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
        • Done.
  • The P&T is lacking a lot of information, you can talk about his actions in the episode as they demonstrate personality Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:03, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
    • I don't really know what else to say there to be honest. Sicaptain(Talk) 16:11, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
      • In the episode, Morley exhibits a lot of unstated character traits (i.e. deceptive, he's a trickster of sorts). AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 19:27, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
        • To add to this, you can recount the characters actions in a way that tells us their personalities, here's a recent TCW example. I recommend checking a few other status articles on characters to see how you can expand that section here. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:04, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
          • I hope that it is done how you imagined it. Sicaptain(Talk) 08:46, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • We can tidy up the death date note: As soon as the episode is mentioned it should be stated that Morley dies, and instead of the note ending with the statement of Morley's death, it should end with the statement that Brothers is set in 20 BBY.
    • Done.
  • The death field in the infobox should only use one reference, you can combine them by mentioning Lotho Minor in the reference where you explain Morely's death date. The mention of Darth Maul's lair should also be removed, mentioning the planet is enough.
    • Done.
  • The biography has enough paragraphs to warrant being divided into two subsections with a quote in each Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:04, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
  • For your date reference notes, you should only use links on the first mention of a subject Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:20, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Great job with the expansion. Still a few things to address
    • The section still needs to be written in past tense
    • There's a few instances that need to be reworded to match our formal academic tone, eg "little bit," use of apostrophes (Morleys->Morley's)
    • The section also needs to be less of a recap of the episode's events and to take everything we learn about the character throughout, eg his relationship with Maul and the fact that his motivation from the beginning in helping Savage is to lead him to Maul
  • And lastly, the article is now over 1000 words, meaning it is required to be nominated as a featured article instead of a good article. That process does take a lot longer, in the meantime it will be excellent if you continue practicing your writing with articles for good or comprehensive status. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:56, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I am aware of the unadressed objections on the first nomination and I am trying to adress them in the near future. If there are any complaints or comments on anything I forgot, please object it in this nomination so everything is in one place. Thank you :) Sicaptain (talk) 19:02, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
    • I have read through the objections again and in my opinion they are all adressed. But still if there are any complaints left, please object it here. Sicaptain (talk) 19:20, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
  1. ACvote Unaddressed objections over ten days old. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:35, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:40, 14 May 2023 (UTC)