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Moon of Avedot

  • Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 21:03, October 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't contributed much to WP:AST or WP:GE lately, so here's one that fits in both.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:12, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:44, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
  3. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Conversation) 01:33, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Very nicely done. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 03:12, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy-Macaroni 10:07, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • In the first History paragraph, I'd like to see it detailed that the confiscated weapons or whatever were taken from pirates, rather than leaving that info exclusively for the Locations.
    • Done. Zed42 (talk) 02:26, October 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • I also think that paragraph can cut the unnecessary detail about how and when the New Republic collapsed. You could write that sentence instead like so: "The facility was eventually decommissioned, but the items it contained were left behind, while the New Republic itself eventually collapsed." And then introduce "In 34 ABY" for the next sentence. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:05, October 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Also done. Zed42 (talk) 02:26, October 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

  • Who is the "contact"? It doesn't appear to be linked to anything. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:51, October 11, 2020 (UTC)
    • Not established. Poe only mentions the contact after already having met them. Zed42 (talk) 11:02, October 11, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:07, 20 November 2020 (UTC)